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"the Break-in"

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Chapter 1
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You awake with a start at the dream you'd just had, your head still resting on the piano in your master bedroom upstairs. You'd been practicing a song you wrote all night so you could show Austria your talent, but apparently fell asleep halfway through the night.

You'd loved his music, and in return wanted to gain his friendship, knowing that he might accept it if you could share his interest in classical piano.

You were recently a new nation, and so to fit in, you decided you wanted to befriend everyone with no trouble whatsoever. You wondered why no one could get along during the world

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{HetaOni}: Englandby ~TheArtisticGenius

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Alright, so most of the next bunch of artworks I upload will look really crappy due to my scanner not working with my new computer. THANK YOU FOR UNDERSTANDING~

I was practicing hands once and this popped up in about a few hours of drawing. Ta-daaaaa... diabolic HetaOni piece.

ENJOY.

Critique by ~aband0n-ship Nov 21, 2012, 7:54:32 AM

Overall, this is really good, much better then anything I could do! The perspective is a little off, making the hand a little bit smaller could fix that, or maybe making his upper arm a little bit thinner. It's a good picture, and I know exactly what you're going for, so vision is 5 stars. Originality is 3 and not because I don't like it, but because it's an anime character and blah blah blah. xD I like the shading and the lines a lot, though the few places it's smudged seem a bit out of place, so Technique gets 4 stars.

And last but not least, Impact gets 4.5, because I really do like this and it shows how much time you put into it ^-^

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~Marcxangfenix Nov 20, 2012

england is so amaizing

~TheArtisticGenius Nov 20, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Ikr? He's one of my favorite characters *3*

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